Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Candy Land Book .1 Adventures of Chocolate

Candy Land
So who ever gathered round to hear this story get ready for a great adventure. Of course i’ll start with my favourite, I mean our favourite.... CHOCOLATE.
So this is called the chocolate guiser. Let’s Start....
I was heading down the road to get some books out from the library when I saw a big sign for a colouring competition. I know it sounds babyish but you can win a luxurious trip to Europe. So I decided to enter. As I took one I realised how big it was. It was probably two A1 papers. But that coloring thing wasn’t the hard part. I found out you had to go to water fountain down town. As I headed towards the big statue of the famous Indian actor Shahrukh khan
I saw something different, It was like a big balloon. I thought I should check it out. So as I followed the balloon I saw everything change right in front of my eyes. The next minute I saw a humongous chocolate guiser. It was shooting up with chocolate sauce and sprinkles. I walked up to it and stared in amazement. I couldn’t believe that I had seen everything change around me. Soon I saw a little man roaming around as soon as he touched the hot melting chocolate it had turned into a nice long brick of chocolate. I had a big urge to touch it but I thought would the same happen to me. But still I mean it’s chocolate. Everyone likes it. Anyway once I touched it turned into something I was thinking about. I was thinking about my Tornado book when the chocolate turned into a chocolate tornado. Of course I was surprised but still I had to touch it.
I took a big piece of the chocolate and ate it. It was divine and delicious. I hoped that maybe it would make a big statue of me. So I started to think about it. As I touched the hot melting chocolate it froze and turned into a big statue of me. I knew that I had to take it back to my friends and family to show them the wonders of the chocolate guiser. So everyone be back next week and listen to the next story.

BYE GUYS

2 comments:

  1. To Ash
    Nice work
    Maybe you can make the font size smaller and just keep it black not purple it hard to read it.
    Good blogpost about candy land! And I like how you used your imagination.
    From Imran

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  2. Hi Ashmira,
    Wow! What a creative story. I'd eat the statue of you- I hope you wouldn't be mad:) Imran makes some good suggestions- a smaller font in a darker colour does make it easier to read. Also, consider adding images to your posts OR even a recording of you reading your wonderful stories. Keep writing Ash, you have a real flare.
    Ms W

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