Wednesday, August 5, 2015

LH1's Zoo Adventure Blog Post

On Thursday 30th July The whole LH1 went to Auckland Zoo.My Dad came as a parent helper too.There was lots of cool animal like Zebras and Tasmanin Devils. My favourite animal is the merecat's because there small and cute.My favourite thing was the merecat's tunnel.I also liked the Girrafes because I like the colour yellow.In my group I had Me , Neha , Aleena , Harry , William , Alysia and Sadeen. It was really fun at the zoo with my group and my dad.


Ash
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 6:57 PM

    Justin V
    It's very good that you talked about what you did
    If you can make it longer you can make it more interesting
    Good thing that you said something about what your group is
    Ash

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  2. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 6:58 PM

    To: Ash
    You have good skills
    Maybe try and look at the spelling mistake for meerkat
    I really like it

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  3. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 6:59 PM

    ash you have a lovely blog you set it so nice
    maybe some more ditails
    what is a wiata
    to ash
    from komal

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  4. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 6:59 PM

    To: Ash
    You have good skills
    Maybe try and look at the spelling mistake for meerkat
    I really like it

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  5. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 6:59 PM

    I liked the tiger because it likes to sleep under the trees

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  6. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 7:00 PM

    to ashmira i really liked your blog when you told us your favourite thing i have no questions from-christian

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  7. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 7:01 PM

    My favourite animal is the cheetah because it looks sleepy

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  8. AnonymousAugust 10, 2015 at 7:05 PM

    i liked reading your blog it was almost like johannah's i don't know why? but i still liked it

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  9. AnonymousAugust 13, 2015 at 3:55 PM

    Ashmira,
    You've had some good feedback already. I enjoyed your post and glad you enjoyed the zoo trip BUT I expect more detail from you! I hope that your next post is a) longer with more emotive/descriptive language and b)more detailed. Great job at the Google Summit - I was very proud of you, your resilience and confidence and I am looking forward to your post all about the exciting day at HPPS.
    Ms W

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  10. AnonymousAugust 23, 2015 at 1:26 PM

    To Ash
    good job this really good. you made such a long story into a very small story.
    I think you need to work on having a little more info about your trip.
    good job

    From Imran

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